Saturday, March 8, 2008

Book Of Notions: Part One

Pen and My Pad
I live and let die
watch sunset, sunrise
with my pad and my pen
I’m symbolizing each line

The thoughts come thorough
first buried in furrow
hearing my heart speak
will there be tomorrow?

My self conscience pays bond
the pen replies to my thoughts
I hear in my writing
will forever be strong

angst and vibes are filled in my breath
pushing top limits I speak in deep depths
the lines on the paper as closing to thin
I speak in deep depth with my pad and my pen

I wrote this poem when i was 13 or 14, I don't quite remember. But yeah, i managed to win bronze in the poetry.com contest and was actually, pretty surprised. And since then, I like to think my talents have sprouted.


5 comments:

abc said...

they will keep sprouting if you don't let the realization of your talents get to your head. Remain humble and you'll go places, inshAllah :)

Anonymous said...

This is awesome Hassan! One of the better lyrics I've read as of late.

Hassan said...

thnx..i'll be posting more poetry/lyrics up often so keep checking.=)

Unknown said...

whoa that was really nice!
especially since you wrote it when you were 13 or 14! very well written =)

Hassan said...

Thanks.=)